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Persian Learner Posted 10 years ago
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The UN High Commissioner for Refugees (UNHCR) was established on 14 december, 1950. It was set up to protect refugees throughout World and to help in resolution of refugee problems. It has its headquarters in geneva, switzerland, but the Orginisization has a staff of around 6.540 in 116 countries. Its main aim is to safeguard rights and well-being of refugees. Large proportion of the 20.9 million people which UNHCR helps are in third world, especially in countries in africa and asia. More than a quarter of the world's refugees, however, are in europe and united states, many of them seeking asylum.

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The UN High Commissioner for Refugees (UNHCR) was established on 14 December, 1950. It was set up to protect refugees throughout the world and to help in resolution of the refugee problems. It has its headquarters in Geneva, Switzerland, but the organization has a staff of around 6.540 in 116 countries. Its main aim is to safeguard rights and well-being of refugees.A large proportion of the 20.9 million people which UNHCR helps are in the Third World, especially in countries in Africa and Asia. More than a quarter of the world's refugees, however, are in Europe and the United States, many of them seeking asylum.
  

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Remaining problems highlighted: The UN High Commissioner for Refugees (UNHCR) was established on 14 December, 1950. It was set up to protect refugees throughout the world and to help in resolution of the refugee problems. 540 in 116 countries.

  • Remaining problems highlighted: The UN High Commissioner for Refugees (UNHCR) was established on 14 December, 1950.
  • It was set up to protect refugees throughout the world and to help in resolution of the refugee problems.
  • 540 in 116 countries.
  • Its main aim is to safeguard rights and well-being of refugees.
  • 9 million people which UNHCR helps are in the Third World, especially in countries in Africa and Asia.
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Remaining problems highlighted:


The UN High Commissioner for Refugees (UNHCR) was established on 14 December, 1950. It was set up to protect refugees throughout the world and to help in resolution of the refugee problems. It has its headquarters in Geneva, Switzerland, but the organizatio
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The UN High Commissioner for Refugees (UNHCR) was established on 14 December, 1950. It was set up to protect refugees throughout the world and to help in the resolution of refugee problems. It has its headquarters in Geneva, Switzerland, but the organization has a staff of around 6.540 in 116 countries. Its main aim is to safeguard the rights and well-being
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Persian LearnerMy second try: The UN High Commissioner for Refugees (UNHCR) was established on 14 December, 1950. It was set up to protect refugees throughout the world and to help in the resolution of refugee problems. It has its headquarters in Geneva, Switzerland, but the organization has a staff of around 6.540 in 116 countries. Its main aim is to safeguard the rights

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