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himy teacher said it has at least 13 mistakes but I cant find outOne day, the Kenedies went for a walk, taking with them their dog and its two puppys. They wanted to get away from the noise of the cars, lorrys and busess, so they headed towards to open fields. The leaf on the trees rustled in the breeze and the sun shown down on the rooves of the houses. As they drew nearer to the country-side, the dog chased butterflys and the puppys yapped at the donkies which were peering through the bushs. At last the family reached the river and sat down to eat their picnic lunchs. Unfortunately, as they ate some tomatos they were attacked by a swam of mosquitos.

CalifJim · Accepted Answer

A great many of the mistakes are related to the rules for forming plurals.

Review the rules for forming plurals.

CJ

Anonymous · Answer

One day, the Kennedys went for a walk, taking with them their dog and it's two puppies. They wanted to get away from the noise of cars, lorries and buses, so they headed towards open fields (OR you can say: they headed to open fields).The leaves on the trees rustled in the breeze and the sun shone down on the roofs of the houses. As they drew nearer to the countryside, the dog chased butterflies and the puppies yapped at the donkeys which were peering through the bushes. At last the family reached the river and sat down to eat their picnic lunches. Unfortunately, as they ate some tomatoes, they were attacked by a swarm of mosquitos.

MOST OF YOUR MISTAKES ARE IN SPELLING, ESPECIALLY FOR PLURALS. Sorry, I can only see 12 mistakes.

CalifJim · Answer

AnonymousSorry, I can only see 12 mistakes.

You just didn't underline and count them all.

its was not wrong.

One day, the Kennedys went for a walk, taking with them their dog and its two puppies. They wanted to get away from the noise of cars, lorries and buses, so they headed towards open fields (OR you can say: they headed to open fields).The leaves on the trees rustled in the breeze and the sun shone down on the roofs of the houses. As they drew nearer to the countryside, the dog chased butterflies and the puppies yapped at the donkeys which were peering through the bushes. At last the family reached the river and sat down to eat their picnic lunches. Unfortunately, as they ate some tomatoes, they were attacked by a swarm of mosquitos.

I count 15 errors that you found.

You used the same plurals for bus and mosquito that I would have used, but the dictionary lists as alternates busses and mosquitoes. I recommend that you leave them as you wrote them.

CJ

Matfever · Answer

CalifJimI recommend that you leave them as you wrote them.

okay, thanks

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