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Sun 94 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Financing concerns

If you see any mistakes in the following sentence, can I have your comments? Thanks always.

(personal statement for college admission)

Financing concerns all the matters and events of society and my great interest in political and cultural issues and discussions with various people would be of good background knowledge for me to study Accounting and Finance.
  

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This is too vague and pontifical. Omit it from your resume or cover letter.

  • This is too vague and pontifical.
  • Omit it from your resume or cover letter.
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This is too vague and pontifical. Omit it from your resume or cover letter.

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