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BeginStudent Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Finally i need help with something.

Hi ,
i have a little part to check from the project before i will give it tomorrow to my teacher.

This one paragraph (Summary of the project):


It wasn't easy for me to do this project because of the following reasons:

First of all, it was quite an issue for me to choose the most appropriate and most relevant materials.

Furthermore, it was hard for me to divide our work load equally, because the project is quite big. We thought that everyone would do a half of the sun-topics for each part.

Second, when I chose the articles the language was really complicated and it wasn't easy for me to understand all the words and to choose the key sentences.

While doing this project the most interesting part for me was the reading because we didn't have to write a lot and all the printed material seemed rather interesting. Reading a lot of authentic English articles helped me a lot. I improved my writing skills and my vocabulary extended.

Second paragraph is :

3)How do peope spread heroin?



Heroin is being trafficked all over the world.The biggest producer is Afghanistan.According to research 87% of heroin is being produced in Afghanistan.Heroin is very easily distribute around the world,because it can be compactly packed and easily concealed.

Heroin is also being spread all over the world because people can swallow it like pills and during 24 hours they can puke it easily.
Those unfortunate people who swallow the "pills" May die because of it .The "pills" are little bit bigger than the normal size pi;; and it can get stuck in the throat or it may be torn inside the stomach and cause
Death even without using the heroin as a drug .

In conclusion, the heroin may be spread all over the world easily ,but the consequences may be shocking .


  

Top answer

Hi, I already edited section 3 in your other thread. Clive

  • Hi, I already edited section 3 in your other thread.
  • Clive
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Hi,

I already edited section 3 in your other thread.

Clive
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BeginStudentHi ,
I have a little part to check from the project before I will give it tomorrow to my teacher.

This one paragraph (Summary of the project):


It wasn't easy for me to do this project because of the following reasons:
First of all, it was quite an issue for me to choose the most appropriate and most relevant mate
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Thanks ,

Clive I don't understand you . you edited me the text or not?
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Hi,

You posted section 3 in another thread in the Forum. I edited it there.

Please don't post the same text in different places, OK?

Clive

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