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Fandorin Posted 13 years ago
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Hello. I have written a small review on a book I read a while ago. I am out of practice a bit and would appreciate if someone can give it a try and point out shady areas I need shed light on? Thank you very much.
Victor finally finds equivalence to his lethally superior skills and encounters an assignment which stretches him to seemingly infinite borders of his abilities almost putting him in a killing zone. Action? Yes! Victor's detachment from emotions? Absolutely! Intrinsic details to see the mission to the end? Certainly!
An extremely enticing cocktail of cool minded planning along with headlong actions are something I can't help being addicted to. Along with Tom Wood's unique ability to depict palpable danger and unprecedentedly deep understanding of fear, Victor's character exudes "every yota of his lethality" just staring in enemy's eyes. Five stars, not a doubt about rating down!
Victor finally finds equivalence to his lethally superior skills and encounters an assignment which stretches him to seemingly infinite borders of his abilities almost putting him in a killing zone. Action? Yes! Victor's detachment from emotions? Absolutely! Intrinsic details to see the mission to the end? Certainly!
An extremely enticing cocktail of cool minded planning along with headlong actions are something I can't help being addicted to. Along with Tom Wood's unique ability to depict palpable danger and unprecedentedly deep understanding of fear, Victor's character exudes "every yota of his lethality" just staring in enemy's eyes. Five stars, not a doubt about rating down!
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Would you like me to offer corrections or just highlight areas that might need a little work? Victor finally finds 1 equivalence to his lethally superior skills and encounters an assignment which stretches him to the seemingly 2 infinite borders of his abilities almost putting him in a 3 killing zone . Action?
- Would you like me to offer corrections or just highlight areas that might need a little work?
- Victor finally finds 1 equivalence to his lethally superior skills and encounters an assignment which stretches him to the seemingly 2 infinite borders of his abilities almost putting him in a 3 killing zone .
- Action?
- Yes!
- Victor's detachment from emotions?
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Would you like me to offer corrections or just highlight areas that might need a little work?
Victor finally finds 1equivalence to his lethally superior skills and encounters an assignment which stretches him to the seemingly 2infinite borders of his abilitie
Victor finally finds 1equivalence to his lethally superior skills and encounters an assignment which stretches him to the seemingly 2infinite borders of his abilitie
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