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Teal lime Posted 6 years ago
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Few people claim that, at the time of.....

Is the following sentence correct? If not, would you please rewrite or improve it for me? Thank you.

Few people claim that, at the time of Mussolini, trains run on time.

  

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teal lime Few people claim that, at the time of Mussolini , trains run ran on time . I'd save colui che ha sempre ragione for the end of the sentence. And "time" twice in such a short space is not great style.

— CalifJim

  • teal lime Few people claim that, at the time of Mussolini , trains run ran on time .
  • I'd save colui che ha sempre ragione for the end of the sentence.
  • And "time" twice in such a short space is not great style.
  • Few people claim that trains ran on time during Mussolini's rule.
  • (Hmm.
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teal limeFew people claim that, at the time of Mussolini, trains run ran on time.

I'd save colui che ha sempre ragione for the end of the sentence. And "time" twice in such a short space is not great style.

Few people claim that trains ran on time during Mussolini's rule.

(Hmm. I thought eve

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