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Knightofsports Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Ferris wheel

Ferris wheel right smack in the middle of the city by the highway on my way to a biz meeting in Minhang district.

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Are you asking us if this forms a correctly structured sentence? First, what do you think? Begin by asking yourself if there is a verb.

— Clive

  • Are you asking us if this forms a correctly structured sentence?
  • First, what do you think?
  • Begin by asking yourself if there is a verb.
  • Clive
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Are you asking us if this forms a correctly structured sentence?
First, what do you think?

Begin by asking yourself if there is a verb.

Clive
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CliveAre you asking us if this forms a correctly structured sentence?First, what do you think?Begin by asking yourself if there is a verb.Clive
CliveAre you asking us if this forms a correctly structured sentence?First, what do you think?Begin by asking yourself if there is a verb.Clive
I have no idea if there's a verb or n
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When I look at other examples of your writing, I get the impression that you can handle verbs quite well. Consequently, I don't know why you find it hard to see that there is no verb there.

It all depends on what your definition of an informal sentence is.
Would you consider eg cha
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But I'm describing a Ferris wheel why do I need a verb?

is Big a verb? Big feet wheel right smack in the middle...
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Big ferris wheel right smack in the middle of the city by the highway on my way to a business meeting.
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KnightofsportsBig ferris wheel right smack in the middle of the city by the highway on my way to a business meeting.
Quit wasting our time. You know what a verb is. Add one, a good one.
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Mister Micawber KnightofsportsBig ferris wheel right smack in the middle of the city by the highway on my way to a business meeting.Quit wasting our time. You know what a verb is. Add one, a good one.
So, big isn't a verb, what about A?

I'm desribing a photograph my friend took on the way to a meeting.
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Knightofsportswhat about A?
A isn't a verb either. It's the indefinite article, the first letter of the alphabet, etc.
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What about: There's a big ferris wheel right smack in the middle....
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What about: There's a big ferris wheel right smack in the middle..- That's better.

http://www.writingcentre.uottawa.ca/hypergrammar/verbs.html
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