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Contiluo Posted 13 years ago
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fellow citizens

Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks.

Next, our fellow citizens are gradually losing the confidence in our country due to the corruption and incompetence of the ruling party. We need a broader, firmer, deeper faith in the people, a faith that the government is founded upon a righteousness which will endure.
  

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Next, our fellow citizens are gradually losing the confidence in our country due to the corruption and incompetence of the ruling party. We need a broader, firmer, deeper faith in the people , a faith that the government is founded upon a righteousness which will endure. The underlined part is unclear.

— Blue Jay

  • Next, our fellow citizens are gradually losing the confidence in our country due to the corruption and incompetence of the ruling party.
  • We need a broader, firmer, deeper faith in the people , a faith that the government is founded upon a righteousness which will endure.
  • The underlined part is unclear.
  • Do you mean that we should have more faith in the people, or that the people should have more faith in the government?
  • If you are referring to more faith in the government, you could say We need a broader, firmer, deeper faith among the people, We need to instill/generate/produce a broader, firmer, deeper faith in (or among ) the people,
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Next, our fellow citizens are gradually losing the confidence in our country due to the corruption and incompetence of the ruling party. We need a broader, firmer, deeper faith in the people, a faith that the government is founded upon a righteousness which will endure.
The underlined part is unclear. Do you mean that we should have more f
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