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New2grammar Posted 18 years ago
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fell more than twice

The profits of our company fell more than twice those of the industry average in the first half of this year.

Is the above corect and natural? If not, please suggest a correction.
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the industry average does not have profits

  • the industry average does not have profits
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the industry average does not have profits
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The profits of our company fell more than twice the average decline in the industry in the first half of this year.

How about the above?
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Simpler:
The profits of our company fell more than twice the industry average in the first half of this year.
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You version is much better! Thanks, MH.

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