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User_gary Posted 19 years ago
Grammar
fell down, edge
I kept my book on the edge of the slope, please take care if it fell down, I am going outside.
Please correct my sentence.
Please correct my sentence.
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Hi Gary First of all, you have created a nasty run-on sentence with all those commas. You need to repair that and also do some rewording. I would usually use 'the slope' to refer to the side of a hill or mountain.
- Hi Gary First of all, you have created a nasty run-on sentence with all those commas.
- You need to repair that and also do some rewording.
- I would usually use 'the slope' to refer to the side of a hill or mountain.
- Do you mean that you put your book on the edge of a shelf that isn't level ?
- And do you mean that the person should pick up your book if it falls off the shelf ?
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Hi Gary
First of all, you have created a nasty run-on sentence with all those commas. You need to repair that and also do some rewording.
I would usually use 'the slope' to refer to the side of a hill or mountain. Do you mean that you put your book on the edge of a shelf that isn't level?
And do you mean that the person should pick up your book if it
First of all, you have created a nasty run-on sentence with all those commas. You need to repair that and also do some rewording.
I would usually use 'the slope' to refer to the side of a hill or mountain. Do you mean that you put your book on the edge of a shelf that isn't level?
And do you mean that the person should pick up your book if it
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