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Contiluo Posted 13 years ago
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feel uneasy

Please help me correct the following paragraph.

Those students who are addicted to the Internet can not help thinking everything on the Net in their daily life. The more frequent and longer time they use on the Internet, they will feel uneasy in case of they have no Internet to use.
  

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Those (optional) students who are addicted to the Internet can not suggest cannot help thinking about everything on the Net in their daily life . The more frequent and longer time they spend use using on the Internet, they will feel the more uneasy they will feel in case of when they have no Internet to use suggest access . Your phrase everything on the Net is a bit vague.

— KrisBlueNZ

  • Those (optional) students who are addicted to the Internet can not suggest cannot help thinking about everything on the Net in their daily life .
  • The more frequent and longer time they spend use using on the Internet, they will feel the more uneasy they will feel in case of when they have no Internet to use suggest access .
  • Your phrase everything on the Net is a bit vague.
  • You could use Internet-based activities or something more specific.
  • Your phrase in their daily life is also a bit vague; you could use while they perform other daily tasks or something like that.
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Those (optional) students who are addicted to the Internet can not suggest cannot help thinking about everything on the Net in their daily life. The more frequent and longer time they spend use using on the Internet, they will feel the more uneasy they will feel
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Students who are addicted to the Internet cannot help thinking about Internet-based activities while they perform other daily tasks. The more time they spend using the Internet, the more uneasy they will feel they have no Internet access.
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Students who are addicted to the Internet cannot help thinking about Internet-based activities while they perform other daily tasks actually I think it would be better to say something like at other times as well. The more time they spend using the Internet, the more uneasy they will feel when they have no Internet access.
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Students who are addicted to the Internet cannot help thinking about Internet-based activities at other times as well. The more time they spend using the Internet, the more uneasy they will feel when they have no Internet access.
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Yep, that's what I said. It sounds OK to me.
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