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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Feel honored

Please check the following paragraph.

Mrs. Zhang is really an attentive teacher. She particularly cares about the hygienic condition of studying environments; therefore, our classroom is always clean and tidy. Her philosophy of living and mind are worthy to learn from. I am honored having an opportunity being her student.
  

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Mrs. Zhang is really an attentive teacher. She particularly cares about the hygienic condition s of the study environment ; therefore, our classroom is always clean and tidy.

  • Mrs.
  • Zhang is really an attentive teacher.
  • She particularly cares about the hygienic condition s of the study environment ; therefore, our classroom is always clean and tidy.
  • Her philosophy of life and mind are worth learning .
  • I am honored to have the opportunity of being her student.
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Mrs. Zhang is really an attentive teacher. She particularly cares about the hygienic conditions of the study environment; therefore, our classroom is always clean and tidy. Her philosophy of life and mind are worth learning. I am honored to have the opportunity of being her student.
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Mrs. Zhang truly is an attentive teacher. She puts a special concern in the hygienic conditions of our study environments, so our classroom is always neat and tidy. (note: redundant sentence, try a little color). Her philosophy to life and her mindset are worthy of learning from and having the opportunity to learn from her is an honor.

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