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Spinnaker Posted 19 years ago
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00I just read your texts about your holidays in New Zealand. It was funny to read your little diary of each day and I was interested about the activity you did. Moreover the photos are suitable to the whole text. You show us your activities and your feelings and you give us the desire to travel to New Zealand as soon as possible. Additional you stayed at different places, so we as narrator become a big view about nice attractions in New Zealand.02br
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00But I have a little comment. It’s a pity that you didn’t give us more information about New Zealand itself. You didn’t mention the people from there or how the food is. I, as a non New Zealander, can’t imagine how it is there. I missed this in your texts. The next time, it would be great to write also about such things like this.02br
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00Yours sincerely02br
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01i00It would be great, if you correct this or giving me a feedback. Thank you!02i0-
  
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