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Hi, can anyone please check the below paragraph? Would welcome any feedbacks. Thank you.
1. Ganesh clashes with three criminal brothers when he tips off the police about them. However, when they try to exact revenge on him, they realize he has a score to settle with them too.
2. Ganesh and his sister try to settle down in Kolkata where she has enrolled for a course to hone her artistic skills. Kolkata is also the operating base of a high profile international criminal syndicate run by three brothers. When Ganesh tips off the police about the syndicate, they are hell bent on destroying him until they realize the beast they have run into is no coincidence, but sheer destiny.
1. Ganesh clashes with three criminal brothers when he tips off the police about them. However, when they try to exact revenge on him, they realize he has a score to settle with them too.
2. Ganesh and his sister try to settle down in Kolkata where she has enrolled for a course to hone her artistic skills. Kolkata is also the operating base of a high profile international criminal syndicate run by three brothers. When Ganesh tips off the police about the syndicate, they are hell bent on destroying him until they realize the beast they have run into is no coincidence, but sheer destiny.
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Hi, can anyone please check the below paragraph below ? I w ould welcome any feedback . Your paragraphs are fine.
- Hi, can anyone please check the below paragraph below ?
- I w ould welcome any feedback .
- Your paragraphs are fine.
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Hi, can anyone please check the below paragraph below? I would welcome any feedback.
Your paragraphs are fine.
Your paragraphs are fine.
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