Hi everyone!
I am a 17 years old by living in Sweden, who need some feedback on a pretty short english essay (one page). I will put a link to the essay below (Google Drive) and would be immensely happy for some feedback and tips on how I can improve my writing!
Essay: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SlFM83Wt34kpEXDkJhXly4Wc0hZSX1jL2OaclqH-nYQ/edit?usp=sharing
Thanks in advance!
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