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1) I think the English is good, suitable for lay readers, though not very academic because it lacks hard facts and figures to support your statements. 2) The ideas are well-arranged so it is easy to follow your arguments. 3) It would not be my place to grade it, though see (1) 4) The question should always begin at the start so readers can understand what the whole article is going to be about.
- 1) I think the English is good, suitable for lay readers, though not very academic because it lacks hard facts and figures to support your statements.
- 2) The ideas are well-arranged so it is easy to follow your arguments.
- 3) It would not be my place to grade it, though see (1) 4) The question should always begin at the start so readers can understand what the whole article is going to be about.
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- To make your paper more academic, I recommend that you use less religion as a basis to compare human mind and computers.
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1) I think the English is good, suitable for lay readers, though not very academic because it lacks hard facts and figures to support your statements.
2) The ideas are well-arranged so it is easy to follow your arguments.
3) It would not be my place to grade it, though see (1)
4) The question should always begin at the start so readers can understand what the whole arti
2) The ideas are well-arranged so it is easy to follow your arguments.
3) It would not be my place to grade it, though see (1)
4) The question should always begin at the start so readers can understand what the whole arti
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Many thanks , sir .
I got an A+ for the essay !
But I truly appreciate your feedback
Many thanks again .
I got an A+ for the essay !
But I truly appreciate your feedback
Many thanks again .
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