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The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee
The given diagram illustrates different stages in the life cycle of the honey bee.
In general, the life cycle usually last from 34 to 36 days and it consists of 5 main stages, from egg to mature adult insect.
The life cycle begins when the female honey bees lay eggs. They often lay for about 1 or 2 eggs every 3 days. After 9 or 10 days the eggs will hatch and the nymph will appear.
In the third stage of the development, the nymph continues to grow and changes its skins 3 times. The first molting stage last for 5 days and the second takes a week. Finally, the young adult honey bee emerges from the final stage, which last for 9 days. After reaching this state, the young adult will need 4 more days in order to fully matured. Then the female ones will continue to lay eggs and the cycle will repeat again.
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The given diagram illustrates the different stages in the life cycle of the honey bee.
In general, the life cycle usually last (wrong form) from 34 to 36 days and it consists of
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