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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Is this sentence hanging or incomplete?

After losing a memory from an accident, Tan tries to find his identity. He doubts himself who he was and where his family is. Eventually, he found something that led him back to his home sweet home.
  

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Anonymous Is this sentence hanging or incomplete? No. It needs a few changes.

— Vsuresh

  • Anonymous Is this sentence hanging or incomplete?
  • No.
  • It needs a few changes.
  • Anonymous After losing his memory in an accident, Tan tries to find his identity.
  • He does not know who he is and where his family is.
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AnonymousIs this sentence hanging or incomplete?
No. It needs a few changes.
AnonymousAfter losing his memory in an accident, Tan tries to find his identity. He does not know who he is and where his family is. Eventually, he finds something that leads him back to his home.
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Thank you.
vsureshAfter losing his memory in an accident
Can you please explain the reason for the changes? It sounds good to me with the "a" and "from".

After losing a memory from an accident- I'm just curious, what's wrong with this sentence? correct me if I
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AnonymousCan you please explain the reason for the changes? It sounds good to me with the "a" and "from".
I feel a memory sounds odd there as we refer to the victim's memory and not a separate thing.

'In an accident' sounds more idiomatic to me.

I think native speakers will be able to help us better.
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Alright, great point and I understand much better now.
Thank you and let's wait for some native speakers' feedback.
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