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Victo Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Faulty Sentence
Without recasting, is this a good sentence, yes or no?
And would you replace 'that' with ' ,which stated the following: '?
Customer Service Manager Jane Doe sent me an email on Thursday 4 May 2013 at 3:14pm that stated the following: ......
And would you replace 'that' with ' ,which stated the following: '?
Customer Service Manager Jane Doe sent me an email on Thursday 4 May 2013 at 3:14pm that stated the following: ......
Top answer
No and no.
- No and no.
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Is this one a lot better?
Customer Service Manager Jane Doe sent me an email at 3:14 pm on Thursday, 4 May 2013 stating the following: ......
Or do you think this one is better?
On Thursday, 4 May 2013 at 3:14 pm, Customer Service Manager Jane Doe sent me
an email stating the following: .......
Customer Service Manager Jane Doe sent me an email at 3:14 pm on Thursday, 4 May 2013 stating the following: ......
Or do you think this one is better?
On Thursday, 4 May 2013 at 3:14 pm, Customer Service Manager Jane Doe sent me
an email stating the following: .......
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On Thursday, 4 May 2013 at 3:14 pm, Customer Service Manager Jane Doe sent me
an email stating the following: .......
an email stating the following: .......
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