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User_gary Posted 16 years ago
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Fateful day expressing a day with extrem happy, extrem sorrow

Today he is died, and this going to be a fateful day for me because I cannot forget them forever. (extreme sorrowness)

I cannot forget today forever because this is a day I got my promotion. It will be a fateful day for me forever. (extreme sorrowness)

Please correct my sentences and provide me with better versions.
  

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(Or is dead)This will be a fateful day for me because I will not be able to forget them. Today is the day I recieved my promotion ,I will never forget this day. Today will always be a fatefull day.

— Anonymous

  • (Or is dead)This will be a fateful day for me because I will not be able to forget them.
  • Today is the day I recieved my promotion ,I will never forget this day.
  • Today will always be a fatefull day.
  • I noticed you said the same thing alot.
  • I will never be able to forget them or this day.
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Today he died.(Or is dead)This will be a fateful day for me because I will not be able to forget them.

Today is the day I recieved my promotion ,I will never forget this day. Today will always be a fatefull day.

I noticed you said the same thing alot. If you did not mean to repeat it so many times here are some better versions

He died today.I will never be able to for
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Thanks Anonymous.

As for dictionary, it seems "fateful" usually has only negative effect, so I wonder if it's correct to include it in a positive happening like promotion.
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