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Amber1406 Posted 8 years ago
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Fast food is becoming a part of our daily life. Some people argue that fast food has negative effects on our lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree?

While some people believe that ready meal is both more convenient and economic than, others claim that ready meal is not healthy for the human. To a certain extent, I agree that fast food is more popular in our society, but I believe that fast food has zero nutritional value.
On the one hand, because of the hectic work schedule, fast food is the best choice. It is acknowledged that ready meal reduces the cost in term of time and financial resources spent on transportation and it makes services more accessible. An increasing number of delis illustrate this point.
On the other hand, fast food only gives low nutrient that harms consumers. For example, studies from the University of London have shown that children who are given more fast food will have a lower IQ than those who regularly eat freshly cooked food. Thus, the more a person eats fast food, the lower IQ of the person is. In addition, besides fast food harms consumers because of low nutrient, it also harms consumer's health. In fact, additive substances commonly contained in preservative and food coloring, it can cause liver damage and liver cancer, unfortunately. Therefore, paying attention to the negative effects of fast food from an early age could keep people from a variety of consequences that will be caused by fast food.
To summarize, it is important for people with low nutrient and negative effects. Thus, they should consumer fresh food to keep healthy.

  

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  • Some people argue that fast food has negative effects on our lifestyle and diet.
  • Do you agree or disagree?
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