Fashion internship letter

hello
I write this letter for a internship in a Clothes disigner society ( Los angeles). I know my english is bad but I try to correct that ...

Someone can help me ?

Thanks

Dear Mrs or Mrs
My strong skills in marketing, and the interest a have for XXXX and fashion, made me a ideal candidate for a Intership in XXXX for April and May 2011.
Since high School I am interest in fashion world, be a fashion show organisator, was a amasing experience permit me to work on the different sides of fashion, realization of this project was the result of the real relentlessly work. I had to have a speed reactivity front of issus and use lot of marketing and communication skills, the creativity of our group help us to be more than ordinary students . That really determinate me to have a fashion career.
Grow up in Paris permit me to build a good fashion culture and watch how fashion moves, internet is also a good way to lern things , I actuellly thanks xxxxx to post so much interessente tinhgs on his blog" XXXXX".
My two weeks in Armani Collezioni Store help me to undernstand what the brand identity is. When I was with the Junior visual marketing manager we have to respect the Armani spirit in all the store that we manage.
I really determinate to make internship in Wildfox and I am ready for learn more than school can teach.
I am sure that would be worthwhile for us to have a phone conference . Should have any question before that time, you may reach me via phone ( xxxxxxxxxxxx) or via email xxxxx.xxxxx@xxxxx
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Mallya