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Maj Posted 22 years ago

Far away

Why won't you let me leave?

Your voice is my in my mind

Deep inside me

In the unkown I hurt, I can't run

Red I sit alone

I let you leave if you take my pain

If you rescue me

from you.

This is a poem for those who are far away. Does it make any sense?
  

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ooooooh maj what made you to write so? its so painful!

— Deepa

  • ooooooh maj what made you to write so?
  • its so painful!
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ooooooh maj what made you to write so? its so painful!
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It's a poem for those people who cannot spend their Christmas together and they feel sad about it. Maybe then they'll know there are other people feeling the same way.
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you must be missing someone special!!
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yes, my common sense. It eloped with my best friend. Lol.
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what! oh my goodness! come on maj i am expecting far better poem from you ... i heard that spanish are the most romantic people in the world!
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Do I have to read between lines that you didn't like my poem? Emotion: sad
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hey maj i didnt mean it , that its very painful and you should write more cheerful one right? even though people are far away can be still with us all the time!
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Why don't you write one? I really like your poems, you know that. I promise I'll write one some other time when i feel better.
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this is dedicated to all those who are far away from their loved ones on christmas...
The sleeping blue sky
Wakes up thoughts
In my mind,
How far you are from me
Only the sky can find,
I wish you were here,
At this moment,
to share the joy with near and dear
What if my wish comes true…
this Christmas.
( dont know how it sounds )
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It sounds a bit unfinished.
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