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Anita_a Posted 21 years ago
Fantasy mirror
She had a smile
On her lips like buds
She had a blush
In her soft rosy cheeks
She had black hair
Flowing like crowning glory
She had big eyes
Sparkling bright with black iris
No worry or frown
On her broad forehead
No flaw or fault
In her fair complexion
The good in her heart
Glowed in her face
The warmth in her kindness
Showed in her laugh
Beauty was hers
And she was mine
With her with me
Death warrant would I sign
She gazed at me
And I looked at her
She was my reflection
In the fantasy mirror!
Read this with a pinch of humour! Boosting my confidence, right?!
On her lips like buds
She had a blush
In her soft rosy cheeks
She had black hair
Flowing like crowning glory
She had big eyes
Sparkling bright with black iris
No worry or frown
On her broad forehead
No flaw or fault
In her fair complexion
The good in her heart
Glowed in her face
The warmth in her kindness
Showed in her laugh
Beauty was hers
And she was mine
With her with me
Death warrant would I sign
She gazed at me
And I looked at her
She was my reflection
In the fantasy mirror!
Read this with a pinch of humour! Boosting my confidence, right?!
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0 Hi Anita a!!! It' the most wonderful poem which has ever sung beauty and virtues of woman! 0-
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0 Thanks Basil. Those were very kind words of appreciation. Thanks! 0-
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0 the reflection of my soul 02 br
00 in the mirror of my dreams 02 br
00 the retrieving of the past 02 br
00 in the core of my eyes 02 br
00 can there ever be 02 br
00 the bright future to see? 0-
00 in the mirror of my dreams 02 br
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0 Hello Anita 02 br
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00 Just a couple of small comments: 02 br
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00 Flowing like crowning glory ] maybe > 'a crowning glory'? 02 br
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00 Sparkling bright with black iris ] maybe > 'with a black iris', or 'with black irises' 02 br
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00 The warmth in her kindness ] 'the warmth of her kindness'? though 'in' m
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00 Just a couple of small comments: 02 br
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00 Flowing like crowning glory ] maybe > 'a crowning glory'? 02 br
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00 Sparkling bright with black iris ] maybe > 'with a black iris', or 'with black irises' 02 br
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00 The warmth in her kindness ] 'the warmth of her kindness'? though 'in' m
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