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Hello good people! Unfortunately, I'm feeling a bit under the weather from last night and have decided not to join y'all for tonight's meetup soiree. I'm sure you all will have a splendid night with the hopes of meeting cool and common interest folks. Good thing the place I'm staying at is cozy and very accommodating, so it'll be a good recovery Saturday. Perhaps, we could all get together on another beautiful sunshine filled day very soon.

Please proofread and tell me if it sounds or looks weird.

Thank you!

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

Here are some suggestions:

I'm feeling a bit under the weather from last night...
Change to make it less ambiguous:
I've been feeling a bit under the weather since last night... (You started feeling bad last night)
I'm feeling a bit under the weather from last night's activities... (What you did last night caused your maladies. )

and have decided not to join y'all for tonight's meetup and soiree.(You can say meetup or soiree, or the combination with and.)

I'm sure you all will have a splendid night ~~with the hopes of~~ meeting cool and ~~common~~ interesting folks. (Better to be optimistic than hopeful.)
common interest folks is not a natural expression. Say folks who share your interests.

It's a good thing the place I'm staying at is cozy and very accommodating. So Saturday will be a good day to recover.

Perhaps, (no comma) we could all get together on another beautiful sunshine-filled day very soon.

Clive · Answer

Hi,

and have decided not to join y'all for tonight's meetup

y'all Are you trying to sound like you are from the Southern USA? If not, say 'you all'

meetup I've never heard this term. I'd say a 'get-together'.

Clive

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