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User_gary Posted 18 years ago
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fan blades cut my elbow, doctor dressed my wounds

Yesterday incidentally while cleaning ceiling wall I put my elbow on the moving ceiling fan and the blades cut my elbow. Suddenly, a stream of blood came out from the wound and actually it became a pool on the floor. Immediately the workers rushed over me and dressed my wounds with medicines they had and bind it with a strip of cloth. Then we went to consult doctor. Doctor cleaned again my wounds and dressed my wounds.


Please correct my sentences. I know this paragraph is a mess but I really don't know to express better than this. Please you help me.
  

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Yesterday while cleaning the ceiling, I accidentally put my elbow into the moving ceiling fan and the blades cut my elbow. Suddenly, a stream of blood squirted from the wound and puddled on the floor. The other workers immediately rushed over to me and dressed my wound with disinfectant and a strip of cloth.

— Mister Micawber

  • Yesterday while cleaning the ceiling, I accidentally put my elbow into the moving ceiling fan and the blades cut my elbow.
  • Suddenly, a stream of blood squirted from the wound and puddled on the floor.
  • The other workers immediately rushed over to me and dressed my wound with disinfectant and a strip of cloth.
  • Then we went to consult a doctor, who cleaned and dressed my wound again.
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Yesterday while cleaning the ceiling, I accidentally put my elbow into the moving ceiling fan and the blades cut my elbow. Suddenly, a stream of blood squirted from the wound and puddled on the floor. The other workers immediately rushed over to me and dressed my wound with disinfectant and a strip of cloth. Then we went to consult a doctor, who cleaned and dressed my wound again.
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