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Linh Ngan Posted 5 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Famous People

BTS is a boyband that i really admire. They are a singer. BTS is touted as talented boyband because they can write many songs by from bottom of their hearts. Moreover, they can speak three languages English, Japan, and Korea fluently. They usually satisfy their fans by many remarkable concert or unforgetable music video. However, the most important reason I admire them is they are optimistic person. They write song because they want to show the people how the world beautiful are. In addition, they transfer a lot of messages of human being. They often people how to love themselves. In conclusion, BTS is a boyband that you should look up.

  

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The yellow highlighting means an error of grammar. Most of your errors are bad choices of singular or plural forms. For example, "a singer" is one person.

  • The yellow highlighting means an error of grammar.
  • Most of your errors are bad choices of singular or plural forms.
  • For example, "a singer" is one person.
  • A boyband is not one person.
  • Japan is a country.
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The yellow highlighting means an error of grammar.

Most of your errors are bad choices of singular or plural forms.

For example, "a singer" is one person. A boyband is not one person.

Japan is a country. It is not a language. Japanese is the language spoken by people in Japan.
Korea is a country, not a language.


BTS is a boyband that

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