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Mbouti Posted 18 years ago
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family unification
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would you check my sentence please?
The mum left long times ago, leaving two young sons with her sick husband.
They grew up by his father for a short while as he died soon with a cancer.
They went to a home for orphans and lived there until they got 18years.
And passed by two decades more after the leaving of the orphanage, the mum and two sons met on a TV station.
The mum wept a lot though two sons were just standing there with holding her hands.
I though the time not come yet to be united as a real family.
would you check my sentence please?
The mum left long times ago, leaving two young sons with her sick husband.
They grew up by his father for a short while as he died soon with a cancer.
They went to a home for orphans and lived there until they got 18years.
And passed by two decades more after the leaving of the orphanage, the mum and two sons met on a TV station.
The mum wept a lot though two sons were just standing there with holding her hands.
I though the time not come yet to be united as a real family.
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Would you check my sentences please? The mother left a long time ago , leaving two young sons with her sick husband. They were raised by their father for a short while , but he died soon of cancer.
- Would you check my sentences please?
- The mother left a long time ago , leaving two young sons with her sick husband.
- They were raised by their father for a short while , but he died soon of cancer.
- They went to an orphanage and lived there until they were 18 years old.
- More than two decades after leaving the orphanage, the mother and her two sons met on a TV show.
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Would you check my sentences please?
The mother left a long time ago, leaving two young sons with her sick husband.
They were raised by their father for a short while, but he died soon of cancer.
They went to an orphanage and lived there until they were 18 years old.
Would you check my sentences please?
The mother left a long time ago, leaving two young sons with her sick husband.
They were raised by their father for a short while, but he died soon of cancer.
They went to an orphanage and lived there until they were 18 years old.
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