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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
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Family love
Please check the following paragraph.
One night, it was about twelve o'clock in late night. I hadn't gone to bed yet. I was busy doing something. Suddenly, my mom shouted outside my room,” Tina, what the hell are you doing inside your room now? It’s already late in night. Open your door! Let me get in to check what’s happening!" I was so angry at the unexpectedly and rashly disturbance that I turned a deaf ear to her clamor and didn't answer the door. After a few minutes, my mom snitched on me to my father. Then my father came to the back of my door and commanded, "Open your door, or I will burst into you room!" I still didn't have any response to him. In a twinkling, the door was struck by a thump and was split into pieces. This incident caused seriously damage to my family love.
One night, it was about twelve o'clock in late night. I hadn't gone to bed yet. I was busy doing something. Suddenly, my mom shouted outside my room,” Tina, what the hell are you doing inside your room now? It’s already late in night. Open your door! Let me get in to check what’s happening!" I was so angry at the unexpectedly and rashly disturbance that I turned a deaf ear to her clamor and didn't answer the door. After a few minutes, my mom snitched on me to my father. Then my father came to the back of my door and commanded, "Open your door, or I will burst into you room!" I still didn't have any response to him. In a twinkling, the door was struck by a thump and was split into pieces. This incident caused seriously damage to my family love.
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One night, it was about twelve o'clock in late night. I hadn't gone to bed yet. I was busy doing something.
- One night, it was about twelve o'clock in late night.
- I hadn't gone to bed yet.
- I was busy doing something.
- Suddenly, my mom shouted outside my room,” Tina, what the **** are you doing inside your room now?
- It’s already late in night.
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One night, it was about twelve o'clock in late night. I hadn't gone to bed yet. I was busy doing something. Suddenly, my mom shouted outside my room,” Tina, what the **** are you doing inside your room now? It’s already late in night. Open your door! Let me get in to check what’s happening!" I was so angry at the unexpectedly and rashly disturbance that I
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One night in the early hours, I hadn't gone to bed yet. I was busy doing something. Suddenly, my mom shouted outside my room,” Tina, what the **** are you doing inside your room now? It’s already late at night. Open your door! Let me in !" I was so angry at the unexpected and rash disturbance that I turned a deaf ear to her clamor and didn't answer the door. After a few minute
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After a few minutes, my mom complained to my father.-- 'Snitched' is a child's action.
Otherwise, very good.
Otherwise, very good.
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