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Hung2003 Posted 6 years ago
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Families who send their children to private school should not be required to pay taxes that support the state educational system To what extend do you agree or disagree.Cannyou help me with this topic?

Nowadays,there are lots of agrument which related to whether parents of children who attend in the private school have or have no responsibillity to contribute to state school through taxes.To be honest,i strongly disagee.

For a miryal of reasons,it would be very unfair if we have taxes reduce for these people.Firstly,every one have to paid taxes that they don't even use it.For example,somepeople never have a general check-up ,some people do,but they all to pay a certain amount of taxes not except any tax reduced.And the most crucial reason is that ,it would cause a thought that wealthy families have less money to pay than the poorer if we have tax discount the parents of private schools' children .And also if we have tax reductions,i will be very complex for the staff to calculate the exactly amont of money for these people.

In my opinion,we have to pay everykind of tasks,even the one that we donot use As it make equal between people.And also it is benifical for the members of society to contribute money to the state educational system,this will result in a high -quality educational system and more productive and prosperous nation And indeed a well-funded educational system wiil provide a well-qualified staff.

In conclusion,There is no neccessary to eliminate tax from the people who have children attend private school

  

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