Fallen leaves
How can I make the sentences below sound natural?
1. Once we went to Fuxing Mt. to watch beautiful fallen leaves. The autumn wind was gentle, and the air was clear and crisp, so the leaves danced gracefully on the soft breeze. At that time, I was intoxicated by the beauty of autumn.
2. Autumn is a refreshing and pleasant season. The breeze flutters, caressing my cheeks gently. It isn’t like neither the chilly winter nor the scorching summer. It has the perfect weather.
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Note: I did not change much as I thought it to be quite good 'as is'. 1. Once we went to Fuxing Mt.
- Note: I did not change much as I thought it to be quite good 'as is'.
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- Once we went to Fuxing Mt.
- to watch the beautiful leaves fall.
- The autumn wind was gentle, and the air was clear and crisp.
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Note: I did not change much as I thought it to be quite good 'as is'.
1. Once we went to Fuxing Mt. to watch the beautiful leaves fall. The autumn wind was gentle, and the air was clear and crisp. So the leaves danced gracefully on the soft breeze. At that time, I was intoxicated by the beauty of autumn
01. Once we went to Mt Fuxing Mt. to watch the beautiful fallen leaves. The autumn wind was gentle, and the air was clear and crisp, so the leaves danced gracefully on in the soft breeze. At that time, T
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