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Gamboler Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary
Faking stumbles and conjuring tricks
Sentence (my try):
See what the famous pickpocket did. Not faking stumbles. This is something outdated. Now, when people stumble into somebody, the first thing they do is to check their wallets. This one stared at his victim and said: 'I know you!'. As in the conjuring tricks, you must know how to distract the audience's attention.
I am not sure if "faking stumbles" and "conjuring tricks" are all right in this context. I think that the rest of the grammar is good, isn't it?
See what the famous pickpocket did. Not faking stumbles. This is something outdated. Now, when people stumble into somebody, the first thing they do is to check their wallets. This one stared at his victim and said: 'I know you!'. As in the conjuring tricks, you must know how to distract the audience's attention.
I am not sure if "faking stumbles" and "conjuring tricks" are all right in this context. I think that the rest of the grammar is good, isn't it?
Top answer
See what the famous pickpocket did ? ) No faking a stumble, which is an outdated trick. ( You're talking about some one thing the pickpocket did, so I think it's more natural to name one thing the pickpocket didn't do.
- See what the famous pickpocket did ?
- ) No faking a stumble, which is an outdated trick.
- ( You're talking about some one thing the pickpocket did, so I think it's more natural to name one thing the pickpocket didn't do.
- ) These days, when someone stumbles into other people, the first thing they do is check their wallets.
- " Careful with the number of your antecedents.
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See what the famous pickpocket did? (It's a question, so you need a question mark at the end.)
No faking a stumble, which is an outdated trick. (You're talking about some one thing the pickpocket did, so I think it's more natural to name one thing the pickpocket didn't do. Also you may consolidate your ideas with the which clause.)
These days, when
No faking a stumble, which is an outdated trick. (You're talking about some one thing the pickpocket did, so I think it's more natural to name one thing the pickpocket didn't do. Also you may consolidate your ideas with the which clause.)
These days, when
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