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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
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Faintly visible

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When I was in elementary school, perhaps Mr. Shi was one of the teachers that I appreciated most. As the time machine brought me back to the schoolyard, the past events were faintly visible. I recalled his diligently teaching and selfless dedication. He acted as a guide to his students, while not pushing them too much. His outlook on education was to help students look for their innocent ego. Therefore, he often took us students out of the classroom to expose to the nature, in the hope of finding the initial purpose of learning as well.
  

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When I was in elementary schoo l, Mr. Shi was one of the teachers that I appreciated most. As the time machine brought me back to the schoolyard, the past events became faintly visible.

  • When I was in elementary schoo l, Mr.
  • Shi was one of the teachers that I appreciated most.
  • As the time machine brought me back to the schoolyard, the past events became faintly visible.
  • I recalled his diligent teaching and selfless dedication.
  • He acted as a guide to his students, while not pushing them too much.
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When I was in elementary school, Mr. Shi was one of the teachers that I appreciated most. As the time machine brought me back to the schoolyard, the past events became faintly visible. I recalled his diligent teaching and selfless dedication. He acted as a guide to his students, while not pushing them too much. His outlook on education was to help students look for their

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