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Guava grape 187 Posted 9 years ago
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Failure to success

hi , sir , could you correct the mistake , please? The man who is engieer, come frome india . At the moment , India's first satelite launch vehide was prepared for the launch . His team felt excited when the first stage preformed to perfection. Suddenly , the second stage went out of control , they felt frustrated. Next , they felt responsible for crash so they try to work . After 1 years , the satelite was successfully put into orbit . There was a loud cheer everywhere and he was proud of his team .

  

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guava grape 187 hi , sir , could you correct the mistake , please? Which mistake do you want us to correct? You text has many, many mistake s.

  • guava grape 187 hi , sir , could you correct the mistake , please?
  • Which mistake do you want us to correct?
  • You text has many, many mistake s.
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guava grape 187hi , sir , could you correct the mistake , please?

Which mistake do you want us to correct? You text has many, many mistakes.

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The man, who is an engineer, comes from India. (He is not living in India now. )

I ask you to fix the mistakes which are highlighted in yellow. It will be a good exercise for you.

At the moment, (I do not understand what time you are talking about.) India's first

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