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Pea33 Posted 22 years ago

Failure

I feel as a failure
When your around here
Much better than me
As I could ever be
So many friends
So many talents
I turn all these bends
My feelings so valid
I love you as ever
But you hurt me forever
I don't want to leave you
But I can't believe you



Somehow this seems incomplete. I do not know how to end it.
what do you think?
  

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with your this poerty i remembered one of my friends .. -(

— Layal1

  • with your this poerty i remembered one of my friends ..
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with your this poerty i remembered one of my friends .. -(
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Yeah, I wrote this about on of my friends
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make the last part like....
somethings has to change
dont know what or how

i dont know its good though keep going with it
thats just the direction i thought it was heading
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hey good Idea thanks blueEmotion: smile!
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I feel as a failure
When your around here
Much better than me
As I could ever be
So many friends
So many talents
I turn all these bends
My feelings so valid
I love you as ever
But you hurt me forever
I don't want to leave you
But I can't believe you
Somethings has to change
Dont know what or how

Thanks too ybbl
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no probEmotion: smile

i really like it

vblueyes
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