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Contiluo Posted 10 years ago
Vocabulary

facial products

I rewrote #1 into #2 as follows. Is there a better correction?

1. People consider that using facial products which contain green tea are even more functional than those that didn’t add.

2. People believe that using facial products which contain green tea are even better than products without.
  

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contiluo Is there a better correction? You can go farther: People believe that facial products containing green tea are better than those without.

  • contiluo Is there a better correction?
  • You can go farther: People believe that facial products containing green tea are better than those without.
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contiluo Is there a better correction?
You can go farther:

People believe that facial products containing green tea are better than those without.

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