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Sundarnaz Posted 8 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Facebook post

Please read through the paragraph and make corrections where you find mistakes. Thanks.

Thanks for inviting me to join the group. As I was scrolling down the group I saw that some post of the group were quite old. I'm surprised why I haven't been aware of the group before?

  

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Sorry, Sundarnaz. Actually I was interested in your post that is why I replied to it in hopes of seeing an answer by a native speaker to your question. Thanks for inviting me to join the group.

  • Sorry, Sundarnaz.
  • Actually I was interested in your post that is why I replied to it in hopes of seeing an answer by a native speaker to your question.
  • Thanks for inviting me to join the group.
  • As I was scrolling down to the group, I saw that some posts of the group were quite old.
  • I wonder why I haven't been aware of the group before.
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Sorry, Sundarnaz.

Actually I was interested in your post that is why I replied to it in hopes of seeing an answer by a native speaker to your question.

Thanks for inviting me to join the group. As I was scrolling down to the group, I saw that some posts of the group were quite old. I wonder why I haven't been aware of the group before.

Regards,

JA

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sundarnazAs I was scrolling down the group

The red part seems superfluous because you have already established what you are talking about.

sundarnazI saw that some post of the group

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