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Dear.F Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

“Facebook is neither good or bad. It depends on how use it.” What do you think about the statement? In about 150 words, write a paragraph to express your opinion.

“Facebook is neither good nor bad. It depends on how use it.” This statement I extremely agree. Anything has two sides, advantages and disadvantages, so Facebook also has them.

The first, the disavantages of Facebook. Facebook is really a big social network, it covers up all around the world, so that, the informations that users can give are also so multiform. It has not only the good informations, but also the toxic ones. The users are being exposed this bad informations can make the serious proplems, such as: murders, criminals, …. In addition, using Facebook a lot is also harmful for your health, exspecially, your back and your eyes. Besides, you can contact with not good people on Facebook, it affects your life not well.

The second, the advantages of Facebook. As you know, the users can give a lot of informations from Facebook. Therefore, it has much many the good informations beside the bad ones. Facebook helps you contact with your friends, you can have better life, such as chatting with your friends instead of calling. You aslo can get the advertisement for your job, or about some course you can sign up to have better skills. Moreover, it has a lot of the creators make the contents which are good for yourself, such as: health, doing excersise, beauty, studying, …. And they are all free! That’s great! So that, Facebook has a lot of advantages.

The finally, Facebook is neither good nor bad, it absolutely depends on how use it. You want it’s good, it’s good. But you want it’s bad, it’s bad. In my opinion, no one wants it’s bad, doesn’t it? Therefore, you must plan to discipline yourself. Let’s follow the good informations, the good influencers. You must recognize the informations which you see is good or bad, and then, you can choose to read or not. Exspecially, you should use Facebook less, don’t expends on it too much.

And the last, the person you want to become, it also depends on your action now. So that, let’s do the positive things to have better life and become the best of “you”.

  

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Instructions:

1. Write a paragraph - You wrote many paragraphs.
2. Write about 150 words - You wrote more than 350, more than double.



Besides, you have many errors in grammar, spelling and vocabulary.
I have marked the errors in the first few sentences.
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