In today's modern world, the widespread use of Facebook has been attributed to an array of benefits. Although I concede that Facebook is advantageous,in my opinion, it may exert dangerously over our lives.
First of all, using Facebook too much will impact on health. It is reported that using this social media for a long time can lead to fatigue or eye strain, as well as headaches. People who use it will feel exhausted because of these symptoms. In addition, it can cause mental suffering.It is the Facebook that triggers the lack of face-to-face interaction between people.Instead of arranging a meeting,they just use Facebook to talking.They will feel lonely and do not want to communicate with anyone.
Secondly,Facebook can cause leaking personal information.Facebook now is full of links which have viruses.If we click these links,our private information may be leaked.The privacy is not guaranteed.The hacker will use them for evil purposes.Life will be more and more awkward.
To summarize,in spite of the fact that Facebook is useful to our life,it dangerously effects to our life.
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