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New2grammar Posted 18 years ago
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face a slow connection problem

Connect your modem to the phone jack directly. I see that your connection drops every 30 minutes or so. This test will determine whether the problem is on your side or ours. If you still face a slow connection problem, do not hesitate to call back.

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Hi N2G I'd say the order of your sentences is a bit confusing. In addition, although the final sentence is not grammatically incorrect, it doesn't sound terribly natural to me. I'd suggest this: I see that your connection drops every 30 minutes or so.

— Yankee

  • Hi N2G I'd say the order of your sentences is a bit confusing.
  • In addition, although the final sentence is not grammatically incorrect, it doesn't sound terribly natural to me.
  • I'd suggest this: I see that your connection drops every 30 minutes or so.
  • Try connecting your modem to the phone jack directly.
  • This test will determine whether the problem is on your side or ours ( OR: "is at your end or ours").
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Hi N2G

I'd say the order of your sentences is a bit confusing. In addition, although the final sentence is not grammatically incorrect, it doesn't sound terribly natural to me. I'd suggest this:

I see that your connection drops every 30 minutes or so. Try connecting your modem to the phone jack directly. This test will determine whether the problem is on your side or
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