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Anita_a Posted 22 years ago

Eyes!

Your eyes are everything for me.
There is nothing else that I want
My world is void without them
When you open them
It is morning for me
When you close them
It is sunset for me
My life and my death
Are under these eyelids only!
Without them I can't go anywhere.
They are filled
In my heart beats,
Carved in my breath.
I will hide them
From the whole world.
I will keep them
Embedded in my soul.
They are my world,
My whole existence.
Since I came into this world
I have not loved anything else
Except your eyes!
  

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Hi Anita what a lovely translation of Indian song: Teree aankoon ke siwa dunyaa mein rakhaa kya hai?

  • Hi Anita what a lovely translation of Indian song: Teree aankoon ke siwa dunyaa mein rakhaa kya hai?
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Hi Anita

what a lovely translation of Indian song:

Teree aankoon ke siwa dunyaa mein rakhaa kya hai?Emotion: smile
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I Love that song. Its the first time I tried translating it... Turned out good, isn't it?
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I am so glad this poem has been selected to be published... No details now, of course!
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0 That's a good translation, Anita. Maybe 'They are filled/In my heart beats' should be 'they are filled/ With my heartbeats'. 02br
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00You should do some more translations! 02br
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0 Thanks Mr. P. I really haven't tried again after this... didn't get enough inspiration to do it. 0-

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