Extract from a short dystopian-military story I am writing

Lord Korahk, first General of the Tiberion Watch, was killed in action last Sunday during a battle which occurred in the Valley of Death. He will be remembered as a fierce disciplinarian and resilient military officer for thousands of generations to come. Nicknamed 'Immortal Fate' (a name he adopted with pride) for surviving one hundred battles: the War of Gamosh, the Titans Pledge, the Xanatian Insurrection and Gamoshian civil war; all of which are considered to have been the most bloodiest wars ever waged in the history of Gamosh'uhi (planet); Lord Karahk's sudden death has shook the world and many are in disbelief. But, the truth is, death eventually comes to us all, nobody is immortal, nobody is capable of outliving fate, we all die in the end, we all return to the source. Let's remember him for the battle-hardened warrior he was, a true warrior, who defied fate for so long... not for the death served to him at the Valley of Death!