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New2grammar Posted 18 years ago
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extra respecful of our guests's privacy

Our hotel staff is well-trained and professional. Your stay here will be nothing but comfortable. We understand that some high profile players will be staying in our hotel, therefore, we have reminded our staff to be extra respecful of our guests's privacy.

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I would use "some VIPs will be staying" - unless there is a specific reason for saying "high profile players" [top sportsmen, for instance] " particularly respectful of our guests' privacy"

  • I would use "some VIPs will be staying" - unless there is a specific reason for saying "high profile players" [top sportsmen, for instance] " particularly respectful of our guests' privacy"
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I would use "some VIPs will be staying" - unless there is a specific reason for saying "high profile players" [top sportsmen, for instance]
"particularly respectful of our guests' privacy"
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Feebs, I agree. Your suggestion about VIP is much better. I was thinking of a professional soccer team which can also be referred to as VIPs.

I have 2 questions.
1. How about "The spears' are throwing a party this weekend"
2. Is extra less formal than particularly?

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