I don't think you had to post that here to be honest. Although I'm not sure what you're talking about in totality, here's what I would write: Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to apply for an extension of my visa because there are still many places to be visited in ***. At this time, I am hoping to visit several tourist attractions at *** which I previously had no time to appreciate.
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