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Fizzi Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
extension letter
Would somebody please comment on the english?
Thanks,
Fizzi
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to apply for an extension of my visa as there are still many places to be visited in (name of a country). I am planning to visit a few tourists attractions as X, Y, V and Z. I had to cancel a few prearranged plans as sometimes the temperature in the winter was so cold for me.
After departure from (name of a country) I will return to (home country) and planning to enrol in a nursing school.
Yours sincerely.
Thanks,
Fizzi
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to apply for an extension of my visa as there are still many places to be visited in (name of a country). I am planning to visit a few tourists attractions as X, Y, V and Z. I had to cancel a few prearranged plans as sometimes the temperature in the winter was so cold for me.
After departure from (name of a country) I will return to (home country) and planning to enrol in a nursing school.
Yours sincerely.
Top answer
I don't think you had to post that here to be honest. Although I'm not sure what you're talking about in totality, here's what I would write: Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to apply for an extension of my visa because there are still many places to be visited in ***. At this time, I am hoping to visit several tourist attractions at *** which I previously had no time to appreciate.
- I don't think you had to post that here to be honest.
- Although I'm not sure what you're talking about in totality, here's what I would write: Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to apply for an extension of my visa because there are still many places to be visited in ***.
- At this time, I am hoping to visit several tourist attractions at *** which I previously had no time to appreciate.
- Due to freezing Winter temperatures, I was forced to cancel several prearranged plans as it was far too awkward in the cold.
- When I depart from ***, I will return to *** and I am planning to enrol at a Nursing school to continue my education there.
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I don't think you had to post that here to be honest. Although I'm not sure what you're talking about in totality, here's what I would write:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to apply for an extension of my visa because there are still many places to be visited in ***. At this time, I am hoping to visit several tourist attractions at *** which I previously had no time to appreciate.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to apply for an extension of my visa because there are still many places to be visited in ***. At this time, I am hoping to visit several tourist attractions at *** which I previously had no time to appreciate.
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