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In total, I have attended and been examined with success in 42 subjects some of which that I would like to highlight are ...Is it correct?

Vsuresh · Accepted Answer

anonymousIn total, I have successfully passed the examinations in 42 subjects, and some of which that I would like to highlight are ...

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In total, I have attended and been examined with success in 42 subjects some of which that I would like to highlight are ...

Is it correct?

I think you're trying to say too much all at once.

You've said that you've attended 42 subjects, but in English we don't say that we "attended a subject". You can attend a play or a concert, and you can attend a class in a subject, but you can't attend a subject.

"To be examined with success" suggests that the examiner has succeeded in examining you. I think you mean that you did well in your exams.

The part with "some of which" is ungrammatical. You should start a new clause.

In total I have attended classes and successfully passed exams in 42 subjects, and some (of them) that I would like to highlight are ...

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