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Lucas21c Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Expression
I am not sure whether the following sentence sounds natural and fine.
Could you check it?
Thank you.
“Remarkable” more often determines people’s decision than how to put design to work for them.
Could you check it?
Thank you.
“Remarkable” more often determines people’s decision than how to put design to work for them.
Top answer
Hi, No good, sorry. Try to say it another way. Clive
- Hi, No good, sorry.
- Try to say it another way.
- Clive
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How about this?
“Remarkable” (design) more often influences consumers' decision for purchasing than how design fuctionally work for them.
(Is it acceptable if I omit the underlined 'design?')
“Remarkable” (design) more often influences consumers' decision for purchasing than how design fuctionally work for them.
(Is it acceptable if I omit the underlined 'design?')
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Hi,
“Remarkable” (design) more often influences consumers' decision for purchasing than how design fuctionally work for them.
(Is it acceptable if I omit the underlined 'design?')
Better.
I suggest
eg Remarkable design rather than design functionality ( m
“Remarkable” (design) more often influences consumers' decision for purchasing than how design fuctionally work for them.
(Is it acceptable if I omit the underlined 'design?')
Better.
I suggest
eg Remarkable design rather than design functionality ( m
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