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I am writting to express my point of view with the general language in Hong Kong.Nowadays,the Hong Kong education standard is worse,because it haven't a good policy for education.Also,the government will implement the 334 Scheme.I belive that can't effectively improve whole student standard in core subjects like Chinese,English and Math.

Have I made mistakes?

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

Kaki - I have some questions about your paragraph. I underlined words that are not correct.

kaki_91819I am writting to express my point of view with the general language in Hong Kong. (Are you talking about the language people are speaking in Hong Kong? The rest of your paragraph does not talk about this.)

Nowadays, the Hong Kong education standard is worse (than what? than other countries'? than a few years ago? ), because it (the government?) haven't a good policy for education.
Also,the government will implement the 334 Scheme. I belive that can't effectively improve the whole student standard (do you mean the students' knowledge or ability?) in core subjects like Chinese, English and Math.

AliceW31 · Answer

My suggested revisions are in green-

I am writting to express my point of view about education in Hong Kong. Nowadays,the educational standard of Hong Kong is declining,as there isn't a good policy for education. Soon, the government will implement the 334 Scheme, which I belive ~~that~~ cannot effectively improve ~~whole student~~ standards in core subjects like Chinese, English and mathematics.

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Kaki_91819 · Answer

Thank you,AlpheccaStars and AliceW31

I thing I need to comment some meaning like it<------(grovernemt)

Also,I remenber your revisions.

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