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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
Explanation Letter
Yesterday when I was going to pass the ticket exit,I found I lost my ticket,then the policeman imposed a fine of $200 on me.I want to write this letter to explain my travel on train without a ticket.As this is my first time to write an explanation letter,I am not sure that the expression is proper.I will appreciate if anyone help me in correcting the fellowing letter.
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To Whom it May Concern:
I am writing this letter to explain my travel on train without a ticket on November 3, 2010.
I have an interview at 8:00 pm , so I got to Hurstville Railway Station at about 7:00 pm.I bought a day return ticket to St James Railway Station and it cost me $5.4.
When I returned,St James Railway Station was closed,so I went to Martin Place Railway Station.I used my ticket to get through the ticket entrance.When I passed,I put the ticket into my pocket,but when I get off the train at Hurstville and prepared to go to ticket entrance,I could not find my ticket.I think it must be lost on the train when I took out my mobile phone from the pocket which the ticket was in too.
Lucky in unlucky,in every ticket entrance there is a closed circuit TV.I think it must recorded the process that I used my ticket to passed the ticket entrance.I passed Hurstville ticket entrance at about 7:00 pm,passed St James ticket entrance at about 7:30 pm and Martin Place ticket entrance at about 9:10 pm.If you need,I will sent my picture to you or I will go there to cooperate with your investigation.
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To Whom it May Concern:
I am writing this letter to explain my travel on train without a ticket on November 3, 2010.
I have an interview at 8:00 pm , so I got to Hurstville Railway Station at about 7:00 pm.I bought a day return ticket to St James Railway Station and it cost me $5.4.
When I returned,St James Railway Station was closed,so I went to Martin Place Railway Station.I used my ticket to get through the ticket entrance.When I passed,I put the ticket into my pocket,but when I get off the train at Hurstville and prepared to go to ticket entrance,I could not find my ticket.I think it must be lost on the train when I took out my mobile phone from the pocket which the ticket was in too.
Lucky in unlucky,in every ticket entrance there is a closed circuit TV.I think it must recorded the process that I used my ticket to passed the ticket entrance.I passed Hurstville ticket entrance at about 7:00 pm,passed St James ticket entrance at about 7:30 pm and Martin Place ticket entrance at about 9:10 pm.If you need,I will sent my picture to you or I will go there to cooperate with your investigation.
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To Whom it May Concern: I am writing this letter to explain my traveling on the train without a ticket on November 3, 2010. I had an interview at 8:00 pm , so I got to the Hurstville Railway Station at about 7:00 pm. 40.
- To Whom it May Concern: I am writing this letter to explain my traveling on the train without a ticket on November 3, 2010.
- I had an interview at 8:00 pm , so I got to the Hurstville Railway Station at about 7:00 pm.
- 40.
- When I returned, the St.
- James Railway Station was closed, so I went to the Martin Place Railway Station.
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To Whom it May Concern:
I am writing this letter to explain my traveling on the train without a ticket on November 3, 2010.
I had an interview at 8:00 pm , so I got to the Hurstville Railway Station at about 7:00 pm. I bought a day return ticket to St James Railway Station which cost me $5.40.
When I returned, the St. James Railway Station was closed, so I went to the M
I am writing this letter to explain my traveling on the train without a ticket on November 3, 2010.
I had an interview at 8:00 pm , so I got to the Hurstville Railway Station at about 7:00 pm. I bought a day return ticket to St James Railway Station which cost me $5.40.
When I returned, the St. James Railway Station was closed, so I went to the M
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