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Sundarnaz Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Explain the text please

I was reading an essay "Why I want to be a teacher". I couldn't understand the meaning of a few lines. Please somebody explain it to me.
"Some positive experiences I think I will have as a teacher is seeing my students grow as the year goes along. Another experience I could have is making a lasting expression on one or many of my students. Even being someone that they can come to with anything. Along with making a difference in children’s lives one way or another. But most of all just having my students come to class and have a smile on their faces, seeing them happy and learning will be the best experience of all."
  

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No wonder you have problems with the underlined text. Even though the writer seems to have a fairly good command of English, some of his sentences, or "sentences", are quite unorthodox as they have no main clause. There are other language problems as well.

  • No wonder you have problems with the underlined text.
  • Even though the writer seems to have a fairly good command of English, some of his sentences, or "sentences", are quite unorthodox as they have no main clause.
  • There are other language problems as well.
  • Another experience I could have is making a lasting expression on one or many of my students.
  • It may happen that I make a lasting im pression on some students.
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No wonder you have problems with the underlined text. Even though the writer seems to have a fairly good command of English, some of his sentences, or "sentences", are quite unorthodox as they have no main clause. There are other language problems as well.

Another experience I could have is making a lasting expression on one or many of my students.

It may happen
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Thanks CB thank you so much.

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