Experts, please help me. I am trying to perfect my essay introductions
You please correct my introduction and make comments if you could.
Thank you so much in advance.
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Here’s the question:
public transportation is a great way to travel, particularly within a city. The metro is the most convenient way to get around a city? Do you agree or disagree?
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Here’s my introduction (of an opinion essay)
Public transport is an effective method to move about, especially in urban areas. As city population is increasing rapidly, it is strongly agreed that the subway is the best means of tranportation to travel in the city. Analyzing the improvement in city living standards at present will also prove this.
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jennifertran public transportation is a great way to travel, particularly within a city. The metro is the most convenient way to get around a city? Do you agree or disagree?
- jennifertran public transportation is a great way to travel, particularly within a city.
- The metro is the most convenient way to get around a city?
- Do you agree or disagree?
- Where did you find that question?
- Are you quoting it properly?
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jennifertranpublic transportation is a great way to travel, particularly within a city. The metro is the most convenient way to get around a city? Do you agree or disagree?
Where did you find that question? Are you quoting it properly? It has a punctuation error, and it appears to be two separate prompts.
0jennifertranThe metro is the most convenient way to get around a city?
That is not a question. It is a statement. Why did they put a "?" at the end?
Also, what do they mean by "metro"? In some cities it is an underground light railway. In other cities, it might be buses. Many cities do not have light rail at all. How can it be the "best" when there
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